
The last few weeks have been dedicated to finishing my second novel and beginning the least loved part of any writing endeavour – the editing. Totally caught in the process you sometimes forget to notice what is going on around you (unless it involves chocolate).
I had to step back and just clear my head. Of course, it proved difficult to do so I started thinking about the sort of things that have given good vibes in the past. It always comes back to nature. In this case my thoughts drifted to rain, not heavy but rather, soft, steady trickles. There’s nothing better to lull us to sleep than that constant pitter patter. There is also nothing more ruthless when it wants to get our attention. Nature like humans has many moods.
Falling Rain: a reflection on human nature
Nature is a mirror,
a storyteller with flair.
Unique and powerful,
allowing us to learn and share.

Do you hear the soft
sprinkle and tender trickle,
of the gentle fall of drops
against your window?
Life-giving, despite the thunder
and the lightning rumble
giving life to tiny buds
reflecting infancy and simplicity.

Do you hear the disturbance
caused as cumulonimbus,
the thunder clouds,
speak with precipitation,
beseeching strong winds
for kindness?
Praying snowdrops prevent
the boil of temperament into
the out-of-control state reflecting
teen years and fears.

The sky explodes
and the atmosphere
cries in fright,
in terror wondering
where it will end and
why this incessant
punishment by nature,
hurts, has no plan.
Or is there more we don’t see.
Grown up worries possibly?

Ancients believes that rain
was the semen of the sky,
falling to inseminate
not decimate with the grabbing greed
of old age to maintain power
and control so fearful
the rain became a series
of sewers and the sweet smell
became absorbed
and locked away.

I call this the unhappy times.
Things have little rhyme,
little reason to cause
gaping holes in the soul
unless we are careless,
unless we ignore nature
as an educator and then
there is no other recourse,
but a heavy shuddering
against the glass and windowpane.
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Till next time,
Barb
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Fabulous poem, Barb. Well done too re being able to say cumulonimbus so clearly!
I laughed at your comment. When I got to the word I was so scared. LOL
The sound of rain is so calming and relaxing. 🙂 Love your poem!
Thank you Michelle.
Beautiful Barb – I love the sound of heavy rain/thunder storms. Reminds of when I was young boy here in Hong Kong and they would cancel school because of a typhoon – I’d get to sleep in to the sound of the rain. Always brings me peace. All the best with the editing! 🙏
Thank you. You made my day.
Well penned! BTW, I love editing. I call it polishing 🙂
Good, can I send you all of mine. How are you on contemporary romance LOL
🤣 Well, I can’t say I know anything about romance 🤣😂😅😁
A ha, I dislike the editing part the most as well. Some writers love it though, and I suspect they’re the type of people who love tidying the house and putting everything in place, whereas writers like us prefer basking in the unlimited possibilities of an empty page.
Just a blanket statement, but still…
Funny. Just think of the unlimited possibilities if we got it right the first time.